"It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye"
Prompt 3: have you ever challenged a belief?
“How great leaders inspire actions” by Simon Sinek has always been my favorite TED talk. Sinek introduces a brief theory of the golden circle, a process of making an action. Although a very simple theory, it directly pierces the point that we all neglected. According to Sinek, while most of our mental process goes from What to How to Why, the leaders make their action by going from Why to How to What, suggesting that the leaders identify necessities first, thinks of how to meet the necessities, and finally through which mechanism would they meet the necessities.
Derived from Sinek’s theory, “penetrating the essence” is what I kept in mind recently as my own principle. Although Sinek’s theory is very intriguing and compelling, it does not seem to fit into every occasion. I understand how Sinek meant to tell us how significant changes come from identifying whys, but I believe the description is wrong, as identifying whys, ironically, also starts with identifying “what” is the necessity. Thus, I decided to make my own Golden Circle that works in What -> Why -> How.
In other words, unlike Sinek’s theory, which focuses on “why” of the process and the variation among people, my golden circle rather focuses more on “what” is the essence. Inevitably, “what” must precede “why,” as in order to identify “why,” you logically have to think of “what” is this “why” referring to. Even when making a literary analysis, you must first identify what is the purpose of the writing and then think of why is this the purpose through how it is described in the writing. Therefore, no matter where “why” is located, “what” must precede “why.”
“How,” on the other hand, could be seen as neglected, as “what” is the most important in my circle and “why” is the most important in that of Sinek’s. Nonetheless, “how” still serves as a very important factor in the circle, but the practicing of “how” itself is what should be considered important. As the circle of “how” encompasses the circle of why and what in my golden circle, it must hold responsibility for solving the problems identified through the identification of “what” and “why”. As repertoires of “hows” could be listed even for a single problem, we should not focus much on the effectiveness of how but on whether it is done or not.
No matter how hard the math problem is, no matter how difficult it is to understand somebody’s opinion, and no matter how complex your interpersonal relationship is, I decided to penetrate the point by using my own golden circle. Even though “why” could serve as a most important factor to look at whenever and whatever, we should never forget that “what” must precede “why” in order to solve the problem.
Interesting that you rebut Sinek's theory saying that 'what' is more important than 'why'.
답글삭제Your essay was helpful I got interested in what Simon Sinek talked about. Maybe I should go and watch the ted talk If I have time. However to be honest It would be nice if you kind of add your personal story to it.
답글삭제At first I just thought you're going to talk about Sinek's circle, but I was amazed that you defined your own circle by rational reasons. I liked your defining and applying to your own standards.
답글삭제Shared an interesting and cool challenges, had ultimate implicit meanings in it, impacted the reader positively. Great job my bro :)
답글삭제It would be better to write about who Simon Sinek is, the purpose of the golden circle, and the details of your own golden circle. The writing style is clear and easy to understand!
답글삭제I love when essays introduce an interesting new theory and I like the style and tone of what you have here. I am definitely going to watch the TED talk. Your style and informative approach and putting your own stamp on Sinek's theory is great. But - you have to make room in this essay to actually do that. I think if you shorten the theory exposition and then add 70% dose of Doyeon style (showing the theory in action - even for bubble tea) you have a sheer winner. So you have a hook but you don't have a "personal" essay that gives us more of "you." You have a first section of an essay and need to move away from the how and why logistics and give us the theory in action. Good start though and I would love to see a second draft.
답글삭제You cited a Ted Talk and your essay sounded like one, too. Through the theory or idea of the Golden Circle you introduced, I was able to look back on my thinking process and the algorithm inside my head, and if it had been done in an effective way. I would like to read more about your experience, such as how you practiced the idea of the Ted Talk after you were impressed by it and any significant event it brought to you.
답글삭제I love how I got to know the thought process in terms of Sinek's theory. The theory itself was very refreshing, helpful, and inspiring. It made me realize that I was perhaps doing the opposite thing of what leaders do. However, as your essay progresses, it was a little hard to catch up as you repeatedly mentioned 'what, why, and how.' Maybe it was because I could only listen to your speech without looking at the script, but I'd say your essay could've been better if it were more comprehensible. I totally loved the topic you picked!
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